trichloromethane kisses

By Sky Singer

lying in the

sickening-sweet

silence

of your arms

i am aimless.

your touch

burns my soul

to the third

degree,

and all i can do

is laugh

with you

as i breathe the

chloroform

that you

exhale






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Copyright 2005 Jessica Anne Wolfe
Published on Thursday, March 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: was going to say that i liked the end best but then i read it again and realised that i love the whole thing. really very true and i agree with phantasmagoria, i love the style that you write with.

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    I like the short-lined, double-spaced style you often write with, it's very easy and light to read, and it allows for your heavy content to show through. This poem hasn't had a tenth of the attention it deserves - great job.

  • Carmina Gitana On Friday, March 11, 2005, Carmina Gitana (152)By person wrote:

    The chloroform that you exhale . . . I just loved that phrase.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    short but good..

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