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trichloromethane kisses
By Sky Singer
lying in the
sickening-sweet
silence
of your arms
i am aimless.
your touch
burns my soul
to the third
degree,
and all i can do
is laugh
with you
as i breathe the
chloroform
that you
exhale
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Copyright 2005 Jessica Anne Wolfe
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A former member wrote:
was going to say that i liked the end best but then i read it again and realised that i love the whole thing. really very true and i agree with phantasmagoria, i love the style that you write with.
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On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
I like the short-lined, double-spaced style you often write with, it's very easy and light to read, and it allows for your heavy content to show through. This poem hasn't had a tenth of the attention it deserves - great job.
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On Friday, March 11, 2005, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
The chloroform that you exhale . . . I just loved that phrase.
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
short but good..
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