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By Spikes_of_Blue
I have to suffer every day,
hearing the words that you dont say,
is it all so hard to do?
all I want is to be with you.
I feel as if I'm dying,
and inside I'm crying,
you cant really care for me too?
all i want is to close to you.
What is it I have to be?
is there someone else but me?
I know there is someone else but who?
all I want is to be loved by you.
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Copyright 2003 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Tuesday, August 5, 2003.
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On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Beautiful Scars
(175)
wrote:
love sucks, i like this poem.. i can relate.. -scars
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Short, but to the point..very well written. -fairy-
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like this it is short and sweet, but has SO many emotions in it...Very moving.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Forever Cold
(33) wrote:
Very nicely said, it is short and simple but with meaning behind it.. i very much loved it.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt
(24) wrote:
i can really relate to this poem. I know how it feels to like someone but feel as though they dont like you in return. i keep asking myself what is wrong with me, but after reading your poem i feel...well...more content with myself.~ap
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
im going through somthing containing these elements........your poem has helped me.......well done......urban
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