Fallen

By suicidalsecrecy

Fallen from grace
Staring in the face
Of the one who started it all
Please help
Please catch me while I fall

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Published on Tuesday, November 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Tuesday, May 17, 2011, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    I believe this may be the most powerful concise poem I've seen. In so few words you've conveyed an utterly hopeless and helpless plea for salvation. I do hope that somehow you are lifted up. Scholar

  • suicidalsecrecy On Thursday, May 19, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42)By person wrote:

    i have my moments. thank you for your kind words.

  • cherietree On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, cherietree (21)By person wrote:

    i like this,people say dnt make short poems but i think this one puts a gd powerful point across

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