Fallen

Fallen from grace
Staring in the face
Of the one who started it all
Please help
Please catch me while I fall

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Published on Tuesday, November 29, 2005. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Fallen"

On Tuesday, May 17, 2011, Scarrzz (238) wrote:

I believe this may be the most powerful concise poem I've seen. In so few words you've conveyed an utterly hopeless and helpless plea for salvation. I do hope that somehow you are lifted up.
On Thursday, May 19, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (43) wrote:

i have my moments. thank you for your kind words.
On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, cherietree (21) wrote:

i like this,people say dnt make short poems but i think this one puts a gd powerful point across