Carried Away

By suicidalsecrecy

Walking alone along this path
Fearing the hold of the Devil?s wrath
Disconnected from this place
Sullen look upon her face
Pretty flowers turned all black
Feelings of never wanting to come back
Suddenly changes made
Feelings of darkness begin to fade
Everyting comes to an end
Mind begins to twist and bend
Thoughts of breaking down the barrier
Angels come to carry her

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Published on Saturday, November 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Tuesday, May 17, 2011, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    That seems somewhat hopeful. What were the changes made? For me, the day when I really decided I wanted to let go of any hope of what I really wanted ( the love of the woman I had opened my heart to) was the day when I started to cope with the pain better. The scars are indeed forever, but at least I can breathe. * BTW, nice meter in this one. Scholar

  • suicidalsecrecy On Friday, May 20, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42)By person wrote:

    things are constantly evolving however, the scars are always there. but no new ones. i'm glad things got better for you

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