Wound

By suicidalsecrecy

She?s got beautiful eyes
And a pretty smile
She?s wrapped up inside
Been that way for a long while
She?s wound so tight
Can?t seem to let loose
Uses all her might
But what will she choose?
Life on the line
Death at her door
This heart made of crystalline
Is full of heart sore
Can?t seem to let loose
For it is entwined
With a tightened noose
She won?t let her heart
Defend who she can be
Her fa

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Published on Monday, October 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Err0r On Saturday, November 12, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Structured and clever. I enjoy these writes the best. Great job.

  • A former member wrote: Ooooooooh, this is wonderful. The rhyme scheme is perfect, and the descriptions are beautiful...great write. *Evangel*

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