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Wonderful
By GreekPhilosopher
She sits in the corner of the room
And eases her surroundings
Far removed from her sight I watch her
Her moves and gestures are testament to who she is
I sit and watch and she has no clue
She does not know what is in my head
And how odd that she would never know
But still I sit and slowly trace her every move
I thought it would be easy, I thought I was through
but I see that this thing I felt and feel now will not leave
When deep down in the dark I know that I cannot ever forget
I guess I should have known that someone like her would have an impact
All the people I am cannot forget the thing she is
Wonderful.
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Copyright 2003 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Monday, March 31, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Wonderful"
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On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
Awesome write. Im in awe ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
That was really buetiful. I think I get the meaning and if I'm right its happen to me before.
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
I think free style allows more freedom to express more intimate and detailed thought and in a world where something wonderful cannot be confined to a structure what else would do it justice? ~Is a Wonderful feeling you have described here~Silver
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
A quiet respite into the memories of what was and the feelings that have changed for the old reflections. Wonderful is wonderful and that can't be changed or preserved only idolized. This is "wonderful"...nicely done.~JMDW~
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A former member wrote:
well for a first time free style...it was "wonderful" . i like very much
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
And I loved it...bravo! ~Velvet~
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
The First And ONLY Time I Write FreeStyle.
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