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Suggest a title. Please.
By veingo
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me.
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© 2005 Veingo
Published on Monday, October 17, 2005.
Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Suggest a title. Please."
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On Friday, November 6, 2015, ColorMeToxic
(238)
wrote:
Wow... cool piece.
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A former member wrote:
Love the format of this piece.
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On Sunday, August 25, 2013, Constantly Connie
(9) wrote:
How about "Depths of Betrayal?" Cool concept!
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A former member wrote:
how about "blind love" or something mushy like that?
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On Saturday, January 21, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...are you kidding, you've already got the perfect title...this'll keep readers playing the game forever...
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
First of all, nice write. Very cool. Never read anything like it before. Now, a title. . . Tunnel of Fire maybe?. . . .but no really, awesome write man!
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, Eternally_Tragic1
(3) wrote:
Deceit?
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
name it "asshole" and call it a day
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A former member wrote:
smoke rings
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On Friday, March 24, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
You Pushed Me? Falling? Deception? for such a simple poem you could name it jut about anything dear.
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On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
I like it^.^
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm, sounds like divorce to me...but then again, maybe marriage...such blunt betrayal! I think I like Demon's title :) sharp write
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
Absolutely wonderful! shewolf
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A former member wrote:
I can't think of a title befitting of this...but I absolutely love it!
Lost
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A former member wrote:
hmm..a title? how about just "falling"? i really like this.
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
This is awesome. No idea with a title though. :)
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On Thursday, October 20, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
that was pretty damned cool
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A former member wrote:
Woah...this...wow...no true comment behind the madness of my thoughts at this moment...as for a title...Vertigo...or...hmmmmm...Fiery Free Fall...or...something...don't mind me, I'm not so good with titles. *Evangel*
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh ssssssssshhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttt
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, A Burning God
(46) wrote:
Fffffffffffaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggggg iiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssssss bbbbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
Verticle, except spelled correctly. or something good, but this work is to good to remain untitled.
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, A Burning God
(46) wrote:
Try "Verticle." you never could spell very well.
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