Shameless...
By A Velvet Tongue
Shameless
synthetic diversion of sin
burrowing under my flesh
like a lascivious leprosy
salacious
...stewed
....sinister
Formidable
arousing this festering need
hidden deep within tommorrow
with amicable dismay
tumultuous
...taxing
......toilsome
Puritan
a single thornless rose
daintily delivered from death
sunkissed and serene
un-equaled
...unmarred
........utopian
Heady
Impetuous boot of despair
mudded, soiled and pissed
crushing life within a mere step
impassioned
...impulsive
.......irrational
Barren
I wait for you
hungry and hollow within
athirst with carnal hydration
rapacious
.....ravenous
.......ready
Shameless
i ache for you
still drunk in your yen
a hand on my breast
paltry
...petty
.......pale...
Ghostly
a clairvoyant's whim
only you know the moments
your thoughts lead to me
scandalous
..sinful
.....Shamless...
Comments on "Shameless..."
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On Tuesday, November 8, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Mmmmm, loved the taste and grit of this, dear one, where the hell did you go? ~ wen
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On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
this was dirty.I can smell your style. its so unique*blue eyes.
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On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
your words capture so much with this structure.......your prose draws my soul every time my love..............urban
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On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
hot
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On Thursday, June 9, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this is divine, the feel and flow like silk sheets dragging across the skin, wonderfully sensuous......sublime
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Loneal
(86) wrote:
Very direct - emotions/thoughts are sudden and "right now". Great write! ~L./Syn.Dark.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Wow, great choice of words to say the least. This is excellent.
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A former member wrote:
oh my god great write
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Great write. Wonderful use of words, you are a walking dictionary ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
completely beautiful...I was lost in the words that were portrayed...