Eternal

By Mahakala

His kisses were like promises in the dark,
And in my heart he left his mark.

Still my soul he did not touch,
I did not love him but I wanted him very much.

Without love we would have nothing.
It pained him so that I would not accept his ring.

Even now that I am dead,
He comes to my grave wishing it were him instead.

Now I'm afraid it's my time to leave.
He swears for eternity he will grieve.

I do not trust promises made to unseen ears.
I fear there is no emotions in his pain and tears.

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Copyright 2005 memnoch
Published on Tuesday, April 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, November 12, 2007, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    I really like the mystery evoked in this piece and the missing details of the story leaving the reader curious as to how this lady died. Excellent :) -Carl

  • A former member wrote: awesome write

  • ONEANDLONELY On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    To look back, beyond the grave, what will we see?

  • LovelyAssassinx On Saturday, April 30, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    This is a very good write. I especially loved the last two lines. Nice Job.~Unlucky

  • Serenity On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Wow this is wonderful. Awesome write!

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    oh very good classical write - gonna keep this one :)

  • A former member wrote: i just got a question are u a guy or girl anyways another great poem thanx 4 sharing

  • A former member wrote: memnoch's a devil....

  • A former member wrote: well according to that writer lady memnoch is

  • Sin On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    ahem...its anne rice

  • A former member wrote: *cough*hack*cough* yeah....... her

  • A former member wrote: Good write btw :)

  • Mahakala On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    Thank You

  • etarnally damnd On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, etarnally damnd (61)By person wrote:

    very good write i like it. -michael

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