Eternal
By Mahakala
His kisses were like promises in the dark,
And in my heart he left his mark.
Still my soul he did not touch,
I did not love him but I wanted him very much.
Without love we would have nothing.
It pained him so that I would not accept his ring.
Even now that I am dead,
He comes to my grave wishing it were him instead.
Now I'm afraid it's my time to leave.
He swears for eternity he will grieve.
I do not trust promises made to unseen ears.
I fear there is no emotions in his pain and tears.
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Copyright 2005 memnoch
Published on Tuesday, April 26, 2005.
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On Monday, November 12, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
I really like the mystery evoked in this piece and the missing details of the story leaving the reader curious as to how this lady died. Excellent :) -Carl
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A former member wrote:
awesome write
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
(114) wrote:
To look back, beyond the grave, what will we see?
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is a very good write. I especially loved the last two lines. Nice Job.~Unlucky
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow this is wonderful. Awesome write!
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
oh very good classical write - gonna keep this one :)
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A former member wrote:
i just got a question are u a guy or girl anyways another great poem thanx 4 sharing
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A former member wrote:
memnoch's a devil....
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A former member wrote:
well according to that writer lady memnoch is
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
ahem...its anne rice
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A former member wrote:
*cough*hack*cough* yeah....... her
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A former member wrote:
Good write btw :)
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
Thank You
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
very good write i like it. -michael