Drinking you away
By Kinkypoptart
One drink goes down smoothly
But still I think of you
Trying to drink it all away
These feelings i have for you
The smile on your face
Makes me need to drink more
You are just so damn beautiful
I can't help but fall in love
Over and over again I tell me
That I can't have you, you're not mine
But my heart just won't believe it
So I just keep right on loving you
These feelings stay so strong
Makes me wonder sometimes
What kinda steroids they're on
They get a hold of me every time
The things you tell me sometimes
Make me fall over and over again
I'd do anything to make you happy
Just to see you smile for me, just once
I sit alone and cry some nights
When Im alone and thinking of you
Alone in the corner, with my bottle
Slowly approaching the bottom
I'm on my sixth drink now
And I still remember you
That calls for a seventh
Something a little stonger
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Sitting in a crowded bar
Someone passes me by, I think of you
I see you in every man I meet
And all I can do is cry
The world is full of men
But all I want is one
That one that happens to be you
...the one that i cant have
I love the way you are there for me
and the way you stick right here....
Running down a long hallway
From my empty thoughts and spoken lies
Broken promises fill my head
Repetitively I wish I was dead...
All I can think about is you...
and nothing will let me forget
Comments on "Drinking you away"
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A former member wrote:
man that just wants me to get some vodka or some shit... thats so strong and painful... that just reminds me of my ex, im saving this poem
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On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
Cry your sorrow to Jack, he is always there to listen. I really like the work.
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A former member wrote:
persistence is a virtue ... like i said before ... damn good ...awesome ... excellent ... your poems drip with emotions ... it is like a rain that sticks to our essence forever ...
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On Saturday, May 7, 2005, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
very emotional, truly amazing, you have a good way of putting things...
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
This is an amazing write and believe me... I've drank myself so stupid... you drink to remember not to forget.
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
"But all I want is one That one that happens to be you ...the one that i cant have " Wants are not needs. I can totally relate to this write, thanks for dredging up the memories. S
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On Monday, May 2, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom
(34) wrote:
Very very good job. I greatly enjoyed this and can unfortunatly relate all too well. Nice.
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
been there, um still there, cant seem to stop myself...........good poem
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
whew...this hits hard and close...now I am wonder which number I am on now....4...maybe 5.
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A former member wrote:
i know that feeling all too well. now im thinking of him...(sob)good job
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
Reminds me of Whiskey Lullabye by Brad Paisley
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, wandering druid
(78) wrote:
*sighs* Those damned thoughts...I understand...even the hangovers don't make them leave...