My Dark Paradise
By Whisper
I wander out in the night,
trying to grasp all of its beauty.
the clouds slowly gliding across the sky.
and the stars seem to have a life of their own.
shadows cradling me, sending me to paradise.
listening to the chirping birds,
and the gentle rustling of leaves.
I am alone, not a soul will bother me.
walking in this darkness sets me free.
and I love watching the moon rise,
just as others love watching the sun set.
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Copyright 2004 Matt Martin
Published on Tuesday, September 7, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
I feel the same way as you
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On Saturday, September 6, 2008, sixsixnine
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I love it!
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On Saturday, September 6, 2008, Lethie
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like it
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On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
dug this, you should post more
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On Monday, August 22, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Moonrise///Sunset - beautiful characterization of a coin that seems to have two tails...
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
lovely
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, empty_love
(15) wrote:
Nice peace, its really relatable.
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
i can totally relate. i often like to walk alone at night. i find peace in the dark solitude. and i love watching the moon rise and fall.
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, ZealousValadiction
(42) wrote:
how I would like to live there
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A former member wrote:
i feel like I relate to these words alot. good piece
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A former member wrote:
I like the contrast - the happiness among all the gloom. Though comforting, it's a sad state of mind you're writing about.