The Tainted Individual

By A_Puppet_Show


There is this slow guitar, an old rusty man,
A screaming women inside, beauty and rot,
And laughs; there is this;
It is enough! question not of more,
Missing the point, look,
I hate you, you ruin this embodiment,
Perfection.

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Copyright 2004 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Sunday, December 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was something else!I'm glad I stumbled across it. *praises the 'random works' button*

  • Solace On Saturday, December 25, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    It is enough! in a disgusting mass of never enough...Perfection never had a chance...simplify simplify simplify...perfection is a quick fuck...

  • Anth On Monday, December 20, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    this made me laugh, is the right reaction?, its a great write

  • A_Puppet_Show On Thursday, January 6, 2005, A_Puppet_Show (166)By person wrote:

    I hope so.

  • Drea On Monday, December 20, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    *kisses Tiger on the forehead* I'm glad to be reading something new. This was....such a great write. You're talent is never ending.

  • K_Love On Sunday, December 19, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Wow.. incredible write. I loved every word. Well done.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    whoa , this is awesome. such lovely imagery in so few words, and the last four lines really said plenty

  • Storm On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    *sighs happily*

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