~taunt~taste~kiss~

By A Velvet Tongue

Sing to me of honey
sing to me of rain
sing to me of passion
sing to me of pain

...............weave in me a fineness
...............none to match or trade
...............weave in me a vision
...............a hue to ne'er fade

speak to me of silence
speak to me of loss
speak to me of failure
speak to me of cost

...............paint in me a picture
...............framed in velvet fair
...............paint me on a canvas
...............my flesh soft and bare

taste me on a tuesday
taste me in the night
taste me on a platter
taste me without sight

...............render me a soverign
...............bathed a scarlet dark
...............render me a pupil
...............my soul a muted lark

free in me a boundary
free in me a stone
free in me a soltice
free in me this moan

...............taunt me in the winter
...............when spring in sleepy rest
...............taunt me in the moonlight
...............just underneath my breast

hush in me this longing
hush in me this hiss
hush in me this craving
hush me with a kiss..

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Published on Sunday, August 15, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "~taunt~taste~kiss~"

A former member wrote: Beautiful. You have a way with words. Well done.
On Saturday, August 13, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

I love it! Your style is addicting...
A former member wrote: mmmm mmmm this is tasty shweet! For so much rhyme, it really does not overwhelm, the obtuse choice of words and capture of seductive sentiment seems to carry through... such form, such structure and yet still somehow boundless and reaching eternal... the
A former member wrote: slight change in the last line is very nice parting touch....
A former member wrote: Amazing, positively amazing. Your writing captivated me and drew me deeper into its message; gentle at the beginning, bittersweet and lustful towards the end. Magnificent.
On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

Damn....this is hot writing!
A former member wrote: Rolls off my tongue very easily. Would make a good song.
A former member wrote: Simple. Nice. no twists or turns here, closed the way one would predict, and in fact would be disappointed to be wrong in this case. I enjoyed it. :)
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

Dearheart, wow, this was enchanting, such a touch. ~ wen
A former member wrote: Duchess, you always leave us overwhelmed with your perfect sense and complete hold on passion, down on our knees, aroused once again...forgive me, but I must indulge in your poetry once more...it's human nature and my duty as a fan.
A former member wrote: Stunning, perfect weaving rhyming it all fits together so beautifully. Such wonderfully effective words. Favourite. ~Wish Upon A Star
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

thoughly decadent and lucious...excellent
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182) wrote:

another wonderful piece Vel. =bows on the way out=