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Pulse
By Dancing_Monkey
Manifest blindsight
Sealed signature
You gave to withdraw
Pulse, starblind serenity
Gather the kindred, a new age has begone
Concealed mindworm. Yes we hold the power, drained
Before the afterflight.
Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom
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Copyright 2004 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Sunday, May 16, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Petra Creffield
(26)
wrote:
smoorh criminal lyrics awesome!! - never really heard them till u posted them wow! amazings - this one short sweet n beautifl and serene :) Px!!!
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On Sunday, June 17, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Ah, fantastic fantasticals woven tight, the blood pumping quick through veins, the music on fire, us all victorious, us all as one. 8 lines of Top Draw Poetics =)
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On Saturday, January 13, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
you express wisdom so flawlessly...and there is such beauty in the simplictic complexity of it...wonderfully done ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
Amazing! Everything about it.
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A former member wrote:
I can't really describe the feeling I had when I read this poem... but it caught me for some unknown reason. Thank you
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A former member wrote:
you write in a complex simplicity,,,i like the articulate foundation. an Exquisite Write.....L.D....
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On Saturday, February 26, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
You're rather amazing. The lines you used were well placed, well used throughout
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A former member wrote:
awesome write
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A former member wrote:
"Yes we hold the power, drained
Before the afterflight. Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" ~ Sensational! . . atmospheric and absolute sublimity. ~ Rose
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is wicked.. i like it.. very much.. "Gather the kindred, a new age has begone" excellent line there.. -Michael
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Ohh yea. I should comment on the poem itself. Hmm you have a way of making me not do that ... Well its gooooooood. And hmm ... no dude this write is too intimate you like. I cant do it ... laters maybe. -Nadir-
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
So stop looking back; and looking in others to define. Or bloom there. I dont know, and I sure dont know anymore. So thats a place to start. To hell with security in things; we needed say that more often.
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Thats all I know, and that was found the hard way ... didnt we? *grins* You will find your pulse, maybe you did long ago. Because it is there to me, and allways has. -Nadir-
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A former member wrote:
The energy flowing through this is sensational. I love how vivid this write has become in my mind. The title fits just right. Wonderful, Monkey.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
A true work of art.. you speak such wisdom, and your wording is incredible. "Pulse, starblind serenity".. gave me a certain feeling, something stirring.. atmospheric.. Wonderful work monkey. *gives you a banana*
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Clementine
(121) wrote:
ballons masquerade like dancing doorbell china, and id fuck you
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
"Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" I love that. Short but far from simple. Good write. -Glass
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
As is usually the case, I don't know what the hell you're talking about, but the feelings it creates seem to make sense. Does that make sense? Nothing makes sense. Enyway, great as usual, Monkeyman ;)
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
"beat poetry" at it's best! DM kicks ass once again... nicely done, my friend, nicely done!
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
short,sweet, neat & meaningful at the same time. awesome. -MeL-
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
you bring forth a new genre of thought, beautiful and wise..............urban
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Yes god damnit, stupid fish that wants to swallow, you hold more inside without, but also with; There all the power to the ones that look futher then a gathering *raising a hand* Tiger
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
well done peter, i like how you weaved this small piece and i especially love how it closed as well; leaves me with a sense of compassion.
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
...I can't believe you ever thought of giving up writing...this is..just..brilliant...What the hell took me so long to read this?!..Cara..xxx...
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
Im slow...and stupid..and,well..blonde (if that counts as any excuse),and so i still haven't read most of your new work...but this was the most pefect way to re-introduce myself to your work...
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
and brilliant. Helt underbar min danske vän, underbar!
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
This is one of those poems where the sentences are in them self perfect and with eachother create a collage of many thoughts in one. Everytime I read it I believe to have found the REAL meaning and everytime am I convinced I was wrong. Intriguing and bril
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
*slap* you crazy monkey, you...Few capture my attention these days...I've become an elitist in the halls of Dp, refusing to dole out my time to any who i dont appreciate...You have my time :)
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
"You gave to withdraw" "New age has begone" "Mold my inner ryhme" Stuck with these phrases, these reference points to satiate my desire for something more than mundane, something profound...
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
This Was Good Although I must Admit That My Poet-Radar-Recognition Programme Has Not Bee Used In A Long Time. GPhD.
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
You can almost feel a beating heart, bleeding in your palm...So short, But deep. I am sure I missed something. *goes back to read again*~Mikey
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
'Gather the kindred' That statement brings about so many different thoughts. Short, but altogether wonderful poem Peter. *hugs* ~Tracy~
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
starblind serenity.... beautiful. awesome write.... -Sue
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
reads like an accusation ... reads from a pulpit of vision ... a welcome scolding for betterment ....lol .. great work man ... funguy
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i like this, as if you described the shapeless thoughts that give birth to everything that come from where?and the thought here is of a united state of mind, to rise
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
"concealed mindworm"-i like every word of this...something being born within...thats how the last line strikes me...
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