Blue Eyed Porcelain

By Mistress Morbid

Bang bang
on the door
bang bang
once more

He is coming for you
and he wants you alive
he wants your sweet smelling hair
and he wants your pretty eyes

he has a special doll for you
in a special case
delicate and fine
in its special place

but his doll is incomplete
it's missing its crucial parts
two fine, piercing blue eyes
and golden locks of art

He has hunt you down thus far
and he will carry out his mission
he brought an axe for leisure
and he will have you in submission

Dont fear what's to come
for it will end you in due time
just cooperate without a peep
and watch him reach his prime

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It is too bad you cant see the final product
for it is a wonderful sight
maybe you can feel it
and hope not to harbor spite

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Thursday, May 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    agrees most completely WLH and Anth! this was beautifully haunting. very clever. i stand all amazed

  • Anth On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    i loved the metaphor here, really clever, stirred a lot of thoughts in me, and the last verse adds yet another perspective, again im awed by the cleverness here

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, May 15, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...ooh...I like, I like...where did this one come from...? very lovely style; I almost felt sorry for the victim, but I was too excited to see the death too much...lol -Darun Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Wow...this is so creative and touching...very haunting. I love it...I'm going to have to read more of your works. Much Respect, June Scholar

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, May 15, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    this was some BOMB shit* i loved this piece will check the rest of your work out sometime*669*

  • Lynaes On Friday, May 14, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Oh my, this was so dark and sinister.. I could see it all, so scary! I loved the colours, it really added to this tension.. Amazing work morb! :D ~L

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, May 14, 2004, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Hmm, this one is kind of tricky. Im not sure what i gathered from this.. Several different things i suppose .. both are a liitle to discriptive to share, but at any rate. wonderful write. [D&A]

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