Blue Eyed Porcelain
By Mistress Morbid
Bang bang
on the door
bang bang
once more
He is coming for you
and he wants you alive
he wants your sweet smelling hair
and he wants your pretty eyes
he has a special doll for you
in a special case
delicate and fine
in its special place
but his doll is incomplete
it's missing its crucial parts
two fine, piercing blue eyes
and golden locks of art
He has hunt you down thus far
and he will carry out his mission
he brought an axe for leisure
and he will have you in submission
Dont fear what's to come
for it will end you in due time
just cooperate without a peep
and watch him reach his prime
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It is too bad you cant see the final product
for it is a wonderful sight
maybe you can feel it
and hope not to harbor spite
Comments on "Blue Eyed Porcelain"
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
agrees most completely WLH and Anth! this was beautifully haunting. very clever. i stand all amazed
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i loved the metaphor here, really clever, stirred a lot of thoughts in me, and the last verse adds yet another perspective, again im awed by the cleverness here
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On Saturday, May 15, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...ooh...I like, I like...where did this one come from...? very lovely style; I almost felt sorry for the victim, but I was too excited to see the death too much...lol -Darun
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A former member wrote:
Wow...this is so creative and touching...very haunting. I love it...I'm going to have to read more of your works. Much Respect, June
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On Saturday, May 15, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
this was some BOMB shit* i loved this piece will check the rest of your work out sometime*669*
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Oh my, this was so dark and sinister.. I could see it all, so scary! I loved the colours, it really added to this tension.. Amazing work morb! :D ~L
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Hmm, this one is kind of tricky. Im not sure what i gathered from this.. Several different things i suppose .. both are a liitle to discriptive to share, but at any rate. wonderful write. [D&A]