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Good Night Kiss
By -Oz-
your laugh is so kind,
when it tints your words
your voice smiles
as if i could see the sparkle in your eye,
through the deep dark
when i face the other direction
with your arm curled around me
in the grave silence
i could hear the smile upon your lips
as you held me tight
and kissed me good night
i could feel you glow
when i rested my head on your heart
each beat made you glow more
until i glowed aswell
and we lit up the room
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Copyright 2004 OZ
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242)
wrote:
Lovely dearest. Just lovely. Your definately one of my fave poets. You're simply wonderful. ~*kitty*~
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(91) wrote:
I love this ending. It spraypaintings my heart-strings with deep thoughts...yay..AWSOME write *.*~GoNe!
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, bloody LOVEly
(86) wrote:
shine shine shine bright. from a loved ones kiss goodnight! humde dum de dum de dee. this is happyness on paper. +_+
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
beautiful. and i absolutely love the closing line; soft and warm and serenely lovely.
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A former member wrote:
This is bitterly and utterly gorgeous. Fantastic. =)
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
i agree. so full and rich and lusicious.... i remember those kiss goodnights yay! ~ss
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