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A World On It's Side
By bloody LOVEly
when everything is upside down
turn around. look up. up is on the ground
look down, and your spinning round.
on this carousel.
the never ending ups and downs
rounds and rounds
whirling past blurred faces
some filled with smiles
while others frown
it's not easy to tell
heaven from hell
when everything is upside down.
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© 2007 bloody LOVEly
Published on Wednesday, May 30, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, June 11, 2007, -Oz-
(134)
wrote:
you've still got that "thing" for writting that you've always had.
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A former member wrote:
Haha. Well done, and I can't agree more
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On Thursday, May 31, 2007, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
This was like a wicked, brilliant lullaby tinged with the adult experience. Top Write! -Carl
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, Midian
(19) wrote:
Nice! I really liked this one. I don't know exactly where you are comin from but, I take it as a sort of look in my prespective type of thing.
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
clever little write you got here.. sounds like life to me good one man
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, bloody LOVEly
(86) wrote:
how would this be classified?
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