Maleficent Fraternity

By nightshade

Can you hear me calling you by night’s death pale light
Beckoning you to follow the wretched paths of night
as i lead you by failure from the immolating light of day
enveloping you with a love that is dying to stay
take a step follow me into the darkness of eternity
come meet your brothers in this maleficent fraternity
Your life is waning swiftly with each ticking of the clock
accept my invitation to join this execrable flock
Lusting every night for the jewels beneath you skin
accept this invitation or pray for your every sin
so follow me into this eternal sorrow filled with pain
or my waste of blood upon your lips will be in vain

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Published on Friday, February 27, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Maleficent Fraternity"

On Thursday, March 4, 2004, BoldSolitude (214) wrote:

I actually had to look up the word maleficient in the dictionary. Great use of it.
On Monday, March 1, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Definately an extensive vocabulary. But the meaning does not elude. Nice flow. I like.
A former member wrote: yahi agree with junatellica...ur so awesome. absolutely super!
A former member wrote: Gorgeous...completely breathtaking. Geez, I love you.
A former member wrote: awesome vocab..*flips through dictionary* give me some time..i think ill get it!
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, nell (270) wrote:

grrr u made me have to look some words up lol, great write really now it flows really well and i love the last lines
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, Drea (1388) wrote:

I can't help but agree with purr and Soul. The rhythm is captivating. You have a great vocabulary with this work. I really enjoyed this. *reads it again* ~Drea~
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, LoneWolf (33) wrote:

I love your vocabulary list, it's awesome to see words like "immolating" since they're so seldom used. Great message too, I give it two thumbs up. ~*~Lone Wolf~*~
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, suicideseason (1636) wrote:

_i love the use of the word "immolating,too.the wording was great.awesome write.-tim
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

yep...this is great Night...you get better and better all the time. Ditto what purr said too! FF
On Friday, February 27, 2004, pessum ire animus (57) wrote:

amazing. just amazing. damn thats good. cant wait till one day when i can write like that. wow
On Friday, February 27, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

nice driving rhythm behind this...and huge huge huge bonus points for 'maleficent', which is one of my favourite words ever. :) purr
On Saturday, February 28, 2004, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

purr nailed this one... its all about the rhythm. I had to look maleficent up in the dictionary. It is a great word :) :::OLd