Icicle
By Mute Serenade
If I kissed your cheek so peacefully
With the untainted haste of trifle clumsiness
Maybe you would blink a moment longer
Remember innocence,
And once more acquaint yourself with fondness...
If I breathe deep enough
Maybe you wouldn't hit
Jagged Disposition
As you graze your hang along my side.
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Copyright 2004 Mute Serenade
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.
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On Tuesday, August 1, 2017, Arwen
(187) wrote:
You made me see Icicles in a whole new way. Thank you!
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
are you done with this poem? cause if not, e-mail me when you are.. it looks unfinished
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On Monday, August 29, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
hmm.. this clipped quite a broad scene in my mind.. it really took me back to some veeery old memories. Kakko ii!!! ~b
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
is it cold here or we simply longing for some love? * such a trippy piece for me non the less still i enjoy wondering *669*
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
maybe you would blink a moment longer ... changes eveything ... the moment longer ... we are readable beasts ... so subtly assurred ... cool stuff ... floodmaster
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Wow this was regretful and mournful...Loved it