Icicle

By Mute Serenade

If I kissed your cheek so peacefully
With the untainted haste of trifle clumsiness
Maybe you would blink a moment longer
Remember innocence,
And once more acquaint yourself with fondness...

If I breathe deep enough
Maybe you wouldn't hit
Jagged Disposition
As you graze your hang along my side.

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Copyright 2004 Mute Serenade
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.     Filed under:
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  • Arwen On Tuesday, August 1, 2017, Arwen (187)By person wrote:

    You made me see Icicles in a whole new way. Thank you!

  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    are you done with this poem? cause if not, e-mail me when you are.. it looks unfinished

  • blue On Monday, August 29, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    hmm.. this clipped quite a broad scene in my mind.. it really took me back to some veeery old memories. Kakko ii!!! ~b

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    is it cold here or we simply longing for some love? * such a trippy piece for me non the less still i enjoy wondering *669*

  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    maybe you would blink a moment longer ... changes eveything ... the moment longer ... we are readable beasts ... so subtly assurred ... cool stuff ... floodmaster

  • Solace On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Wow this was regretful and mournful...Loved it


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