my every day

By Johny_D_Lewis

unwanted...

most of life
neglected by most
hated by others

uncared for

live or die
who would know
who would care

not knowing

more than i see
more than i hear
or even what i feel

completely numb

just a day in my life
need a change
need to be seen

black and white

no color
no emotions
just part of the background


my everyday

people see me daily
and never notice me
just my everyday.

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Copyright 2003 roachboyman
Published on Friday, October 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blackdarkness On Friday, May 7, 2004, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    sometimes I wonder if people would notice if I didnt wake up one day

  • A former member wrote: I think everyone can relate to this work. You've got a talent for telling it like it is. Great work ps: We know you're there and we care *

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, October 20, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    damn, we all have *everydays* that is why it is so important to have something to look forward too...even the smallest of things..

  • A former member wrote: Good write.... i like it lots... laterz *~angel~*

  • Drifter On Friday, October 3, 2003, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Amen... Sometimes i just want to get naked and run around, see if people would notice me then... LOL

  • Drifter On Friday, October 3, 2003, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Really though, it speaks volumes. Awsome.

  • Drea On Friday, October 3, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    i like this. you can feel the words... good write.. ~Drea~

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