Swaying Silent
By Maladroit
"Non verbal" they said;
we are,
mostly.
We stay quietly loud.
You live in two universes;
often in your exited state,
your body moves through my world;
and I just remind you the watch your step.
Which nebula do you play in?
I dream myself there-
with you;
we never watch our step...
Language remains futile...
Nebula conversations aren't even for poets...
Oh,
But...
here-
you were here today...
in our new cocoon,
leaves were new world wonders;
you kept looking at me like I had God's hands...
...Paralleled sentiments...
swaying silent;
in an intimate conversation-
I assign oak leaves to hold my promises;
In a continuous attempt of creation-
Molding this snow globe of ordinary magic,
adding napping posts
to cradle your nebula exit;
Spaces to hold your otherworldly hands,
quietly sending palm transmissions;
Generating a disclosure
of you-
as my first world wonder
&
You-
as my interstellar cloud
Author's Note:
I pretend we are telepathicComments on "Swaying Silent"
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On Monday, March 5, 2018, Poetic-Realm
(253) wrote:
You are telepathic. You will see one day. When all the things he wrote down in his head are there for you to read.
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On Thursday, May 25, 2017, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
it's beautiful poetry; there's a perception that doesn't need noises...
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On Thursday, May 25, 2017, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
It's you! I've asked around for you!
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A former member wrote:
a love like that can't be bound by words. yet it shines through them in these.
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On Thursday, May 11, 2017, tmanzano
(207) wrote:
Pretend? No, this is more real than most things I have know in my life, if not the most. A surreal read. Your lines are thick with virtue and destiny. The speed and breaks, almost like breathing in syncopation with an outer wonder fantasy. Love...
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2017, dwells
(4177) wrote:
The bond exists like no other ever has or will Mala. Body English and face language can speak volumes in loving tones of tenderness. My grandson is also autistic... Cheers and kudos - Dan
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2017, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
This was a beautiful piece! I love, love, love the line "We stay quietly loud." Gorgeous piece! Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2017, Star
(879) wrote:
oh, how gorgeous this is. i am glad that he has you to care for him. autism is one hell of a thing.