Redondo beach 09-02-16
By Adagios
Whimsy
Lighting now anew, song of spring and air, wind upon the face, wind within
the hair, blowing all away, smog and city smoke, dank a soul that wastes,
dark are harbor floats, air and light renewed, all within the land, all
within a life, sea and air and sand, playing with the breeze, running into
surf, swimming to my knees, drawing in the dirt, loving all today, drinking
in the noise, bars rouse all within, as drinks are grown toys, play friends
are within, the warmth within a throat, warm within a gut, warmth rekindled
hope, more than just the booze, one again with man, one again with all,
no longer one I stand, leaving loud for still, walking city streets,not
just the vagrant, no where I see grief, replaced I now observe, little
growing things, little hopes in doubt, hope with fragile wings, still the
great spirit, all around enfolds, all of us are one, truth is often told,
every blissful dream, every moments peace, in sun and surf I beam, in spring
and air I weep.
Comments on "Redondo beach 09-02-16"
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A former member wrote:
I felt like I was there with you, just letting it all go and rejoicing in the hope that such an event can bring. I think that this is going to be bookmarked. Reb:).
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On Monday, January 30, 2017, out there
(166) wrote:
'hope with fragile wings' -love that. Like CJ says the emotions and spirituality palpable here and I like the rhyming flow too.
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On Monday, September 12, 2016, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
The joy in this poem is so real and palpable. An absolute pleasure to read.
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On Monday, September 12, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Thank you jackal, I've enjoyed reading your stuff over the years, very grateful for the feedback.
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On Sunday, September 4, 2016, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
So many great lines throughout this piece, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I like your style, unique and refreshing, and that's what drew me in. Jolly good show, yea. -Write on
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On Sunday, September 4, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Thank you goddess, that is very high praise coming from you.