24

By Intoxicating Delirium

Twenty four…
It’s just a number
Except that it’s
Anything but
Just a number
 
It’s full of should have been
And could have been
And why didn’t you do
All the things you were
Supposed to do
 
So much potential
Wasted on a girl 
Who is never on time
Who is always behind
 
Who is out of place,
Lines starting to show
Too many 5 am nights
Her martini, now a foe
 
No husband to speak of
Or anything close
Will she ever find love
Not with her wining and woes
 
Kids… well that’s interesting
Never in a million years
Did she think this could be
A problem or something to fear
 
You’re almost to 30
Then you can’t bare
Without complications
My god, don’t you care?
 
To have a baby by 30
Well I must prepare
Marry the next guy
Who seems a decent pair
 
Maybe it’s just realizing
Life isn’t fair
You only get one chance
And if you blow it beware
At twenty four you’ll realize
You don’t have a prayer

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  • Adagios On Sunday, March 25, 2018, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    Excellent ink. As reader I could almost feel the room shrinking as I read. Well done.

  • man of decay On Wednesday, September 7, 2016, man of decay (58)By person wrote:

    I have an affinity for the number twenty four since it's the day of my birth. Very nice work.

  • darkheartmagic On Sunday, January 24, 2016, darkheartmagic (81)By person wrote:

    Long long time since I've had a chance to read anything from you but as always I have really enjoyed your work. I finally finished baby doll three cant wait to see what you think

  • A former member wrote: Lovely write, enjoyed reading this very much and could relate to a lot of your words. "no one likes you when you're 23" just screamed in my head as I got to the last lines. Thanks for sharing this!

  • Lab Rat On Wednesday, January 6, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    Ah the little white lies of a society with blinders on. Make no promises, accept no critique. Carpe Diem, little sister, Carpe Diem. Thank you for the hindsight.

  • dumbone On Wednesday, December 23, 2015, dumbone (62)By person wrote:

    Yep you determine your own fate, good write. Cheers

  • Commander_Cadaver On Tuesday, December 22, 2015, Commander_Cadaver (233)By person wrote:

    Never thought a number could hold so much emotion. An even number at that.

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