Reborn
By Sketso
trusting, when I've never trusted...
seeing what others can't see...
it's an odd feeling, this one,
a fighter's surrender
...and the one going down...
is me.
I let you inside this personal bubble,
and you hold my life in your hands.
then it comes...
confusion,
panic,
it's all closing in!
sinking,
DROWNING!
...free...
start again.
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Copyright 2013 Sketso
Published on Wednesday, November 20, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Reborn"
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A former member wrote:
Very good work...
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On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...good write. struggle gives way to acceptance...
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On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, Lady Poetry
(38) wrote:
Superb poem ,,,magnificent x
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On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
I loved this...it reminded me of the music video for "Don't Cry" by GN'R, only in ways it was more than that.