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Rise, Phoenix, Rise
By megaprime81
Rise like the Phoenix
You're burned to ash
You need a new birth
Bound in chains as you are,
Your soul's in flames
Agony and pain
You must endure
Or perish in your cries
Rise, Phoenix, rise
Survival is a must
Or demise is eminent
You can't break free
If bound in chains
For eternity
Rise, Phoenix, rise
Otherwise it's your demise
Toss aside all deception
And lies
You'll never know love
If you suffocate on pain
Choking on despair
Rise, Phoenix, rise
Altar your fate
Before it's too late
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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Wednesday, September 25, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Rise, Phoenix, Rise"
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(260)
wrote:
This is brilliant. I love the Phoenix and this is exquisitely done
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2014, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
You never know if you're going to save or inspire one person, but if you do you've accomplished something great..I got to read this at the exact time I needed to, so thank you for writing it.
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A former member wrote:
yes we need to get busy living or get busy dying. nice write my poetic friend
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you for the quote from The Shawshank Redemption; it's very true, and i need to get busy living.
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On Tuesday, November 19, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
wonderful read, a belated welcome to dark poetry
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On Tuesday, November 19, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Muchas gracias. I thank you for the welcome.
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On Tuesday, October 29, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
People who identify with the phoenix, are so anxious to be reborn over and over again, that they forget to finish what was left behind. Welcome to DP and thanks for your comment Poet.
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On Thursday, October 31, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. You guys are great. I love the feedback.
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On Wednesday, September 25, 2013, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
for the record I think you should delete your authors note... this is more than just a ok poem... you have written an amazing piece of creation... know that we're capable of great and endless possibilities... thank you for sharing this...*tips hat*...much respect and light...-knight
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On Wednesday, September 25, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. But i feel words take a back seat to action. i'm too lazy to ever make it as a pro.
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On Wednesday, September 25, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Great flow and theme, love it:)~ Thanks for sharing ~^_^~ and Welcome to DP :)~
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On Thursday, September 26, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you, man.
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
When i commented, i didn't know you were a female. I apologize.
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