Soul Search

By Sean Mc Shane

Dawn
the burning lake
the dream inferno

from lost ages
wisdom's funnel
thru uncharted ideas

recollections of damnation
rejection of winter's song

a slower drag

downward

out of the hole
shadow blackened
tainted by turmoil

the scene is set for sharper words

a question never asked
the death of another chance

broken mysteries linger

searching for a hidden altar
white moon dancer
wolves at the gate

a magnificent procession
under all cosmic law

violations unchecked

override the mainframe
focus on a star






 

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Copyright 2014 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Monday, February 3, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Searchin' for something I thought I already had
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  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, February 9, 2014, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks everyone for the cool comments. And thanks Megaprime81 for the bookmark, always cool. Til next time and later -

  • Peyton1 On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, Peyton1 (204)By person wrote:

    Hey Sean, haven't seen anything from you in a while and nearly missed this one. If I read correctly between the lines, that sucks and I'm sorry to hear it. Personally, I'd rather the dawn not come at all, than to bring with it the end of the dream. Drop me a line sometime, later dude................... ~ACE~

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...taking inventory. unreachable star, but we keep reaching...

  • poe_lover28 On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    the imagery and flow were fantastic, completely swept me off my feet, only certain parts felt very dark and I liked that, 10

  • blue angel On Monday, February 3, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    From the darkened shadow a star is gazed upon... Admired from afar. Nice*

  • A former member wrote: I liked how the structure of it was composed. Very good read thanks for sharing!

  • A former member wrote: Hmm intresting to soul search in the brink of endless night frm a dreamscape into deep space. Awesome write

  • megaprime81 On Monday, February 3, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Truly awesome work, great flow and rhythm. I love it! 10


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