Ravens Wings

By DeepLoversPoet

Weep for me my blackened rose
dripping your blackened blood all over the floor.
Hearts beat faster
as Ravens caw at your door.
Fowl or beast
I took a look inside a heart made up of blackened oil. 
I saw nothing but an ink smear from a broken quill,
plucked from the same Raven
I once called a beast. 
It shouts to me through cracks in my darkened walls
room is fluttering of feathers so black
what a beast this Raven is
scratching smearing ink in my thoughts.
Leaving my heart to putter and to mutter through.
I soon will be leaving this darkened room, 
to venture out on Ravens wings. 

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Copyright 2014 DeepLoversPoet
Published on Friday, January 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Sunday, August 24, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Words can't even begin to describe how amazing this really is...The metaphoric embedding of how your thoughts are formed. And taunting thoughts that continue to carryover upon flight to anew. You've left me stunned. I really enjoyed this and I'm glad I stumbled across this. Thank you. Scholar

  • haunted On Saturday, March 29, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    wow, you nailed a great piece here. this is amazing, i really love your writings, your in touch with your dark side your in touch with the flow of words and your a great writer. very impressive deep lover. awesome!

  • DeepLoversPoet On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks I'm glad you enjoy it. :)

  • A former member wrote: Outstanding work...So dark and so beautiful...Thanks for sharing

  • DeepLoversPoet On Sunday, January 26, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

  • megaprime81 On Friday, January 10, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Awesome write. I love the flow and imagery. 10

  • DeepLoversPoet On Saturday, January 11, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks I'm glad you liked it and for the ratings.

  • blue angel On Friday, January 10, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Love it.. The images are so clear, yet dark in their beauty :) Thanks for sharing*

  • DeepLoversPoet On Saturday, January 11, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

  • A former member wrote: I like how everything about this poem screams the words "black", "ink" and "darkened"...some might say you overused these words, but honestly I liked it..it put a certain emphasy to them...nice write

  • A former member wrote: I just had to read this...Its my name...and I love it

  • DeepLoversPoet On Friday, January 10, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks I'm glad you liked it. Raven is a good name. Also I love The Raven By Edger Allen Poe so I had to post this because I'm so very proud of it.

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