Till Death

Arrogant time, master of all
Who made you the dictator?
Determinant of our actions here
We remain at your mercy
Till death do us part

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Published on Friday, January 10, 2014. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Till Death"

On Friday, January 24, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Very tight piece, excellent form. Ciao, T/S
On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Olufunke Kolapo (42) wrote:

Thanks so much for your kind comment :)
On Sunday, January 12, 2014, theassasin3453 (8) wrote:

I enjoued your view of time. Time is a slow killer as is everything else in the world, very well executed and welcome to dark poetry
On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Olufunke Kolapo (42) wrote:

Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment and warm welcome :)
On Friday, January 10, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

I love this! Flawless execution. 10
On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Olufunke Kolapo (42) wrote:

Thanks soo much....and I love the flawless execution too. Brilliant.
A former member wrote: The personification of time being arrogant not only amused me momentarily, but also rang so true. Short and sweet, good read.
A former member wrote: Yes...time indeed can be a monster...the atrocious wall that keeps pushing us, in a slow, tormenting manner towards that deep, deep edge that is death...like a horror rollercoaster....well written, and a warm welcome to DarkPoetry, where time stands still