angel in chains

By FadedBlues

angel in chains

 
 
avancer, amour:  je t’adore
craven courtesan, compassionate whore
 
colder the kiss, & brighter the flame
lure of my passion – allure of my shame
 
pleasure perverse, treacherous djin
sanguine seductress – slave to my sin
 
beckoning bleakness. beware of the light
dancing dervish in the shadows of night
 
perilous rhythm of a clarion bell
heavenly hardcore – harlot of hell
 
lockdown Lolita, commanding the key
ever in chains – yet eternally free
 
bite of the cane. kiss of the lash
inglorious goddess – elegant trash




 

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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Wednesday, November 27, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • dreadlox33 On Friday, August 5, 2016, dreadlox33 (65)By person wrote:

    I wrote a similar poem like this once. I've read so much junk on this site that just seems angry with no point....... I, however, enjoyed your write and I liked the opening french line. The poem, I felt, had some good context. You have a nice day. ....dreadlox33@aol.com

  • A former member wrote: Absolutely astonishing. I love how each part is trashy and classy at the same time. Inglorious goddess, has this poem stuck in my head.

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, November 28, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Friends & Poets, thanks. your commenting, c'est magnifique!...

  • A former member wrote: 'ever in chains-yet eternally free' the poetic beauty those words play on each other is simply amazing!! je t'adore

  • A former member wrote: Damn, Faded, this is a masterful piece. Dark erotica with elegant rhyming. 10/10 to you sir

  • Hands_Around_My_Throat On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat (67)By person wrote:

    "inglorious goddess – elegant trash" I loved the way this rolled off the tongue, and how it spread out varying perspectives on the same scene. The way one might feel in the moment, and how one may reflect on everything.

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Another perfect poem! So much talent on this site, but this is stunningly written.10

  • blue angel On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    I advance to say, I adore this. Tasty erotic treat in chains, blue :)~... love it****

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