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angel in chains
By FadedBlues
avancer, amour: je t’adore
craven courtesan, compassionate whore
colder the kiss, & brighter the flame
lure of my passion – allure of my shame
pleasure perverse, treacherous djin
sanguine seductress – slave to my sin
beckoning bleakness. beware of the light
dancing dervish in the shadows of night
perilous rhythm of a clarion bell
heavenly hardcore – harlot of hell
lockdown Lolita, commanding the key
ever in chains – yet eternally free
bite of the cane. kiss of the lash
inglorious goddess – elegant trash
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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Wednesday, November 27, 2013.
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On Friday, August 5, 2016, dreadlox33
(64)
wrote:
I wrote a similar poem like this once. I've read so much junk on this site that just seems angry with no point....... I, however, enjoyed your write and I liked the opening french line. The poem, I felt, had some good context. You have a nice day. ....dreadlox33@aol.com
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely astonishing. I love how each part is trashy and classy at the same time. Inglorious goddess, has this poem stuck in my head.
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On Thursday, November 28, 2013, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
Friends & Poets, thanks. your commenting, c'est magnifique!...
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A former member wrote:
'ever in chains-yet eternally free' the poetic beauty those words play on each other is simply amazing!! je t'adore
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A former member wrote:
Damn, Faded, this is a masterful piece. Dark erotica with elegant rhyming. 10/10 to you sir
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
"inglorious goddess – elegant trash" I loved the way this rolled off the tongue, and how it spread out varying perspectives on the same scene. The way one might feel in the moment, and how one may reflect on everything.
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Another perfect poem! So much talent on this site, but this is stunningly written.10
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
Passionate and beautiful seductive write.....
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
I advance to say, I adore this. Tasty erotic treat in chains, blue :)~... love it****
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