Sea Squall
By saltyman65
Crystalline sparkle,
Spinning,
Spinning!
A trillion tinny razors, randomly cutting.
Slicing slivers……… reveal buried layers.
……
….
Rushing water quivers~(~~~(~ released to the sea(((
Remains; exoskeletal:
Tumble skitter,
to^
Wild Gust Winds of…Screaming Sand!
Mounds of whipping dune
grass,
awakened by a gale,
Splaying like digits to a protoplasmic band.
Air pulls back, to discharge))))))
An atmospheric sneeze!
Expelling>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>. a breath
It’s “Saltry” breath
acrosssssssssssssssssssssthatwooooooodyreeeeeeeeeeeed.
A Cash of Bottles,
Joining
In,
No deposit, No return
Vocalizing whistles,
Screeching Humming’s Shrill and low.
Symphonic Chaos
Random measure
Semiquaver notes
Pelting, shatter, sharp and scratch
Many years exposed,
Cataractic glass
Looks…………….. out…………. Into………………white………………………………
To a high rushing sea……………..alone…
alone…
together…....}sound bite{
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Comments on "Sea Squall"
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A former member wrote:
I really like what you did with the format, it was unique and fun. The poem just slid right through everything to simply. It fit together so well. Great job!
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On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
I love how you played with the format. Brilliant! The whole thing was an awesome ride from start to finish. 10