Submissive Suicide

By FearlessDragon

Disorganized orchestral orgasms explode!
Marring the minds of men,
Uniting us in slavery

Uncertain circumstances close in on our closed minds!
Prejudice paves the path,
Misguiding our journey

Misinforming fear forms beneath our feet!
Seeking solutions not self-suggested,
Demolishing independent inquiry

Delectable delights of deviancy divide us!
Dissecting and destroying our true desires,
Leaving us blind and weary.

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Published on Tuesday, May 21, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Submissive Suicide"

A former member wrote: Glad to see you are posting again sir! Powerful and wise.. much enjoyed!
On Thursday, May 30, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

Much to ponder but to what end I wonder? Self-defeat and deflated is too terminal a sidetrack to the main route of existence. Perhaps only as simple as happiness? Cheers FD!
On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Pit falls and tampered with signs, on out way to True North...... Like the structure.... Alliteration , limited words that say a lot in each stanza, with quite a punch . X x
On Tuesday, May 21, 2013, andhaka (168) wrote:

Your user name suits this piece perfectly. Fearless indeed. Your words are powerful, fierce, and wise. Excellent read.