Lake swimming

By Stephanie Sideways

Streamlined hands spear the lake, cascading a rhythm repeated
Smooth undulation descends with each stroke I take
A perpetual movement where my weight is defeated
Streamlined hands spear the lake

Effortless, graceful, no splash do I make
White noise sees my stresses retreated
Leaving my worries back there in my wake

A mile,maybe two, body and mind ,meditation completed
Wonderfully tired, beginning to flake
The waters do witness my tension deleted
Streamlined hands spear the lake.

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Copyright 2013 Stephanie Sideways
Published on Thursday, February 21, 2013.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Another roundel done in 25 mins in a creative writing group.
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  • dwells On Thursday, February 21, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Got used to swimming with flippers, mask, and snorkel - over the reefs. So lake swimming is still refreshing (if not too cold) but somewhat laborious. Sink or swim, and don't let those worries drag you down. Thanks Stephy!

  • Stephanie Sideways On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Hempstead lakes, London. Really quite lovely. X x x

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