Centro poem ( second line is mine)

By Stephanie Sideways

Comforting smell breathed at very entering
'tween fine leaves, drank of wisdom left
Like wealthy men who care not how they give
So smelling their sweetness would be no theft

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Published on Wednesday, February 13, 2013. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Breathing some new life into lines of famous poets . It's a really fun exercise, giving some great lines a new meaning. Can you recognise any?

Comments on "Centro poem ( second line is mine) "

On Friday, February 15, 2013, dwells (4179) wrote:

None of these lines are familiar to me but the first one should end with an exhalant "OHhh..." probably, unless coming into a warm house on a cold holiday, and smelling a roasting turkey in the oven maybe? Cheers!
On Friday, February 15, 2013, dwells (4179) wrote:

AND - your second line reeks of sexual innuendo too, but then that could just be me, thanks Stephy!
On Thursday, February 14, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...the sensibility of recycling has moved into the art of poetry...
A former member wrote: "I remember a house where all were good to me, God knows, deserving no such thing: conforting smell breathed at very entering, Fetched fresh, as I suppose, off some sweet wood." Beautiful.
On Wednesday, February 13, 2013, FearlessDragon (137) wrote:

I really like this! I love fresh ideas, if I may be so bold i believe I may try this... Who said this quote?
On Thursday, February 14, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Comforting smell breathed at very entering ( Hopkins . In the valley of the Elwy So smelling their sweetness would be no theft. ( Frost, I harvested) Like wealthy men who care not how they give .( Tennyson Tithonus) X x x. If you get time, google the poems to see the context they are in.