Root erosion

By Stephanie Sideways

Longevity suffocates and can be too mucH
Omitting less easily,those repeated stigmA
Vexing even a most forgiving, long-suffering hearT
Eroding loves foundations with roots of hatE

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Copyright 2013 Stephanie Sideways
Published on Tuesday, January 8, 2013.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Dying love, hate,
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  • A former member wrote: great write, great structure, great everything... your little poem above has a huge impact, its so complex yet so sad the subject is that easy...

  • FearlessDragon On Monday, January 7, 2013, FearlessDragon (138)By person wrote:

    This is all so absolutely true! Love it! ;)

  • A former member wrote: A bipolar work of art if I've ever seen one, fantastic write

  • dwells On Sunday, January 6, 2013, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Hate is indeed subterranean, great metaphor and cleverly done, cheers!

  • Electric-Chair On Sunday, January 6, 2013, Electric-Chair (122)By person wrote:

    Good Life Lession, Sweet and powerful great work Sideways!

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 6, 2013, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...from love to hate in 1 quick poem, artfully constructed...

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