Root erosion

By Stephanie Sideways

Longevity suffocates and can be too mucH
Omitting less easily,those repeated stigmA
Vexing even a most forgiving, long-suffering hearT
Eroding loves foundations with roots of hatE

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Published on Tuesday, January 8, 2013. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Dying love, hate,

Comments on "Root erosion"

A former member wrote: great write, great structure, great everything... your little poem above has a huge impact, its so complex yet so sad the subject is that easy...
On Monday, January 7, 2013, FearlessDragon (137) wrote:

This is all so absolutely true! Love it! ;)
A former member wrote: A bipolar work of art if I've ever seen one, fantastic write
On Sunday, January 6, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

Hate is indeed subterranean, great metaphor and cleverly done, cheers!
On Sunday, January 6, 2013, Electric-Chair (121) wrote:

Good Life Lession, Sweet and powerful great work Sideways!
On Sunday, January 6, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...from love to hate in 1 quick poem, artfully constructed...