Heaven ( rhyming acrostic)

By Stephanie Sideways

H elp me to understand heaven dear priest
E mpty the doubt from this logical beast
A ll I keep thinking is how is there space?
V ery squashed up, what a God awful place!
E veryone rammed in and forced to be friends
N ot sure I fancy that when this life ends!

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Copyright 2013 Stephanie Sideways
Published on Tuesday, January 1, 2013.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Not sure where this came from, just on an acrostic role!
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  • haunted On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, haunted (839)By person wrote:

    i loved it, acrostic poems look like alot of fun. someday i'll give it a shot. you make it look very simple and its done very well. awesome!

  • FearlessDragon On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    A new way to look at it... I rather like this... Well done Stephy!

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, midnights voice (959)By person wrote:

    I am sure it all I nought .

  • dwells On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, dwells (4233)By person wrote:

    Only this mortal coil is keeping us from returning to the broader universe from which we sprang - Boing! There I go again, cheers Stephy, good one!

  • A former member wrote: beautiful and very creative! i always get alot of problems when i attempt to combine acrosticons and rhyme, but this is done flawlessly! nicely hurting the pride of what "heaven" is supposed to be. great work.

  • PoetessDarkly On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, PoetessDarkly (698)By person wrote:

    very creative work. the imagery and rhyme is awesome

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