Heaven ( rhyming acrostic)

By Stephanie Sideways

H elp me to understand heaven dear priest
E mpty the doubt from this logical beast
A ll I keep thinking is how is there space?
V ery squashed up, what a God awful place!
E veryone rammed in and forced to be friends
N ot sure I fancy that when this life ends!

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Published on Tuesday, January 1, 2013. Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Not sure where this came from, just on an acrostic role!

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Comments on "Heaven ( rhyming acrostic)"

On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, haunted (852) wrote:

i loved it, acrostic poems look like alot of fun. someday i'll give it a shot. you make it look very simple and its done very well. awesome!
On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, FearlessDragon (138) wrote:

A new way to look at it... I rather like this... Well done Stephy!
On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, midnights voice (971) wrote:

I am sure it all I nought .
On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, dwells (4298) wrote:

Only this mortal coil is keeping us from returning to the broader universe from which we sprang - Boing! There I go again, cheers Stephy, good one!
A former member wrote: beautiful and very creative! i always get alot of problems when i attempt to combine acrosticons and rhyme, but this is done flawlessly! nicely hurting the pride of what "heaven" is supposed to be. great work.
On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700) wrote:

very creative work. the imagery and rhyme is awesome