Avenue of My Body.

By M Morgan

you pick up your brush
since gave up his words
and draws a line
and says that I am

I'm a bit more than that
2 dashes already enough

I take your hands
and gently paint some words
you no longer understands
then I paint my picture

I'm a bit more than that
2 dashes not enough

then, by drawing on me
which carbon paper
to see if you remember
Who I Am

I'm a bit more than that
a silhouette is not enough

A ghost you say
want something more solid?
open your hands
black ink seeping through his fingers

I'm a bit more than that
invisible ink and so thin

Black and white
really try scribble my Body
So I am
The pale line again

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Copyright 2012 M Morgan
Published on Friday, November 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • midnights voice On Sunday, December 2, 2012, midnights voice (1009)By person wrote:

    A portrait of a physical poem of love unseen or uncaring.

  • dwells On Saturday, December 1, 2012, dwells (4531)By person wrote:

    Quite a bit more than all of that I'd say - the sum is greater than the total of its separate parts perhaps, cheers!

  • FadedBlues On Friday, November 30, 2012, FadedBlues (2282)By person wrote:

    ..Pygmalion composes Galatea of art & poetry...

  • haunted On Friday, November 30, 2012, haunted (978)By person wrote:

    this was an awesome poem. it has great imagery. thanks for this! very cool.

  • Strataic On Friday, November 30, 2012, Strataic (110)By person wrote:

    Beautiful imagery... If only he'd remembered who you were... As you become the pale line again... lovely thanks. Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Friday, November 30, 2012, PoetessDarkly (765)By person wrote:

    lovely imagery

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