Pearl Grotto (v. 3)
By Carmina Gitana
Our mouths are oysters,
pearls growing inside
as quickly as they
can drop from our lips,
catching on our clavicles,
nestling in our navels,
pooling in the gully where we join,
studding our sexes
sweetly as currants in a cake,
richly
as jewels encrusting
a crown or a relic.
We arc against
one another
like tangling stalagmites.
We make a grotto
filled with such
dripping extravagance.
The passage
is narrow,
but we are swift
silver fishcreatures, streaking,
flicking slippery slick & silken
bubble-baubled fingerfins
along the louvering quiver
of opening shells.
We reach the
mouth,
and I
am a waterfall,
plummeting,
plunging
deep,
exploding hard,
swirling mindless, scattering breathless
spume,
and you
are a shuddering precipice,
your
knees are mountains,
crushing tectonic, crumbling
around
me, a howling
apocalypse of triumph,
raining rock and
sand,
endless grains of sand.
Each one will become
a pearl.
Author's Note:
I've been writing this for nigh on 3 years. I may have finished it. MAYBE :)Awards
Comments on "Pearl Grotto (v. 3)"
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, Stranger
(263) wrote:
I return to this poem often, for escape, inspiration, elation... Thank you always for the way your writing has moved me.
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On Sunday, April 29, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Wow, metaphors within metaphors, marvelous. Stalactites and stalagmites can also join and create columns. Sensual and coming full circle at the ending, well done Carmina, thanks.
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On Sunday, April 29, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...beautifully crafted...in time, the perfect words & pictures fall...