Little Black Bordered Things

By GreekPhilosopher

Little things
Undistinguished from the sky
Wafting around without a care why

Little black things
Going unnoticed as they try
Frivolously passing by

Little black bordered things
Searching seeking something
Notice nothing

Little black bordered things
My minds thoughts

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Published on Saturday, July 19, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Little Black Bordered Things"

On Friday, September 24, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

very good write, "undistinguished from the sky, wafting around without a care why" , really liked this .. simplicity with meaning..
On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Bluegirl (177) wrote:

I really liked this one :)
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Nice and unusual piece - enjoyed this one very much! Ciao, T/S
On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

As a reader of this you get a connection to the poet, by sitting in the exact same situation with the same feel of little things Wafting around without a care why.. very good
A former member wrote: seeing as your so poetically talented n all, i didn't really get much of it, but the whole idea i'm guessing was good lol, very nice..
A former member wrote: very cool greek. i felt like i was straining to see something floating by on the breeze. well done
On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Lydia Jade (1332) wrote:

i agree with bwb here i kept trying to see the little black things! ~Blood~