Sorrow's Plea

By rosemaiden

Breathe out loud
Don't let the sparrows hear you cry

Fall into place
As everything dies

Cry unto me
Beautiful sleep

Lay me down
Forever will you keep

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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Monday, February 6, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Thursday, February 16, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Rose, beautiful re-working of the old bedtime prayer...

  • A former member wrote: Why sparrows? Tell us about the sparrows. Good write.

  • A former member wrote: Such a haunting lullaby. Nice write.

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    thank you :)


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