Reality But Feels Like A Dream
By rosemaiden
It all started when we talked
Our eyes were locked
You
smiled at me
And I smiled at you
Then suddenly it grew
That feeling deep inside
It was hard to hide
But oh how I tried
Suddenly you were always in my thoughts
In my dreams, in my
songs, especially when we talked
Every time I see you my heart
beats faster
I get nervous and my words become tounge twisters
But what really scared me is when a little thought creeped into
my mind
About losing you at any time
It hurt to breath
It hurt to sleep
I tried so hard but couldnt eat
And
you looked at me with those eyes that go right through my heart
You
said "My heart will always be with you when we are apart"
The
feeling I had was so surreal
Its like all my scars began to heal
Cause in that moment you told me honest and true
You gazed
into my eyes and said "I love you"
Comments on "Reality But Feels Like A Dream"
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On Saturday, January 14, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Rose, very pretty & a nice reversal on the belief that some dreams feel real...
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On Saturday, January 14, 2012, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
Thanks......a lot of people write about dreams that feel real but you don't read a lot about reality being so good that it feels like a dream
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A former member wrote:
Such a beautiful, love inspired, write! It put a smile on my rather dour face today! Thank you! :)
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On Friday, January 13, 2012, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
thank you :)......i'm quite happy and just spilled out lol
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A former member wrote:
No problem. You should enter this into Dev's poetry contest: http://www.darkpoetry.com/contests/enter/43