The Art of Drowning

By rosemaiden

Floating.....waiting.....staring

Weightless......careless

Darkness....silence

Pain....dissapointment

Regret.....shame

Pictures......shadows


Peace..............

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Copyright 2011 rosemaiden
Published on Saturday, November 5, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • whisperingwalls On Thursday, November 10, 2011, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    Wow, I personally tend to use fragmented imagery in my writing, and I've always had a fascination with the sea, this was a gem.

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