Mr. therapist

By terris crimson

well down into the depths again,
you delve into the dark recesses of my mind,
into a twisted world that holds my darkest dreams,
I find it funny how you say I'm psychotic Mr. Therapist,
when you deep down are just as fucked up as me,
just as a blooming rose,
life is beautiful but forever fleeting,
there is always an expiration date,
so how can I politey imply moving yours to a closer date in the time frame,
you live for all but all for nothing,
your life is completely lived in vein,
your life is lived through the eyes of others,
rather "false sight" in which you assume in others,
your life will end just as all is certain to see fit,
not with a bang but with a whisper,
no not with a bang but a whisper,
but for now Mr. Therapist,
I am simply just going to tell you where to shove your "Psycho analysis" bullshit,
and suggest for you to end your life,
and if it is successful,
don't call me in the morning.

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Copyright 2011 terris crimson
Published on Thursday, August 18, 2011.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Adagios On Sunday, October 16, 2022, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    Lmao! I loved this and the ending, and find it relatable in more ways than you can possibly know (even those on the other side of this line are aware of the hypocrisy, lol). Solid

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Friday, December 7, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Loved this. Way to stick it to 'em.

  • A former member wrote: A stroke of enigmatic beauty! Feraled haarmony in Raw emotion! Thank you

  • maliceman On Monday, August 22, 2011, maliceman (32)By person wrote:

    haha. how i should have told my therapists this, i find it funny now that i look back and realize that i am majoring in psychology... but to actually help the world, not to torment troubled young adults like myself

  • terris crimson On Tuesday, August 23, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    lol u r officially awesome ^^

  • terris crimson On Friday, August 19, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    thanx^^ and you are both so very correct.

  • dwells On Thursday, August 18, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Liking the T.S. Eliot misquote "not with a bang but a whimper" - much more fitting for a shrink to whisper, thanks.

  • A former member wrote: inside we're all the same, i love it. really shows the simplicity in life. no one really has the right answer for another person, do they? Good read.

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