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My mortal hell.
By Iwas
This Cell A Frozen Mortal Hell.
These bars. Bouncing off walls like
a fly in a jar.
This concrete cage builds rage.
I've got to
get out. Got to get out. I need to be freed.
So cold this
cot, this boiled egg.
To see the sun, my son I beg.
They have
stolen the light.
It isn't right. It's just not right.
No
razor, nor shower.
These doors are all locked.
Mirrors not
real everything is steel.
So lost and alone. It's all I feel. all
we feel.
You know my name.
You know my fear.
Help
me please.
God, get me out of here. I need out of here.
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Copyright 2010 Iwas
Author's Note:
It's my horror.Comments on "My mortal hell."
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On Thursday, June 4, 2015, imortalone
(30)
wrote:
ey i try to go by the username imortalone :) maybe check out some of my writing http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/user/53752?preview=1
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On Sunday, January 9, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Panic and despair. I know what this feels like. I love the way you got it out of your soul.
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On Monday, December 13, 2010, man of decay
(59) wrote:
I was in prison for five years so i can relate. I have no formal education but you can obviously write.
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A former member wrote:
"bouncing off walls like a fly in a jar"..what an image!You have such a cool way of rhyming
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A former member wrote:
Vividly expressed and well written , thank you for the read .
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On Friday, November 19, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
fear and anxiety... makes for a fine poem... I got to get out of here... thanks for sharing
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2010, alex herewane
(150) wrote:
They say the hardest thing about being locked up is the lack of contro of what's happening outside and the way the mind plays tricks on what is happening and the lack of contact with the ones you love. Ive seen prisoners refuse visits and phone calls and cut of all contact with the outside world. I really enjoyed this write. keep writing.
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On Tuesday, November 9, 2010, Poetic-Realm
(258) wrote:
it seems the artist is keen on trapping himself within himself.... I find that we may never get out of this, but we will always try to find out how. Good Write :]
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