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Black Rose
By HeadpatSlut
Black Rose
A rose that was for my love picked-
A token for Her love to me-
The scarlet rose by serpent licked-
The beauty she could see.
Careful then I took the plant-
And plucked it from the vine-
To save myself from mental rant-
I took her hand in mine.
“I give to thee this Rose of Black,”
Proposed I thus to her-
The momentary looking back-
Young lovers
that we were.
The Rose was black and grown in hate-
The
vines that have grown to cover-
My love for her was come too late-
The Death of my first lover.
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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Author's Note:
Written in memory of my first lover, Devon Rose.Comments on "Black Rose"
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A former member wrote:
breathtaking work.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Star
(879)
wrote:
damn this is dark but yet filled with love awesome work dude
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Wow, so amazing. Its steeped in darkness and love. Great combining of the two. I have a post called Black Rose too, but i have to say, i like yours better mate. Great read. Write on:)
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On Thursday, July 8, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
That pierced my soul, a tragic tale of love and loss, one of your earliest you say? Impressive, a sad read.
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