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Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil
By Riven Waker
The hypocrites
Will never touch
My evil heart
So pure and
true
Impervious
Voidal God
I remain
Unforsaken
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Copyright 2010 Riven Waker
Published on Sunday, May 23, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil"
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A former member wrote:
So few words, so much said! Love it as always! :)
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A former member wrote:
Interesting title.... I can't read it without the Nietzschean connotation.... on the one hand I think the inversion of purity and truth would be consistent with what Fritz explicitly denounces as inversion of the current value system.... rather than a deconstruction of it. Of course.... there is reason to suspect that being nice, ever, would then result in hypocrisy....which would be a rather unfortunate value system to uphold unless one really wanted to be a complete ass.... haha. either way interesting read... fiction, truth.... are they not both perspectival.... kudos fellow god.... worship only thyself!
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On Monday, May 24, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806)
wrote:
Dark and delightful... so pure and true.. nice.. well written, thanks for sharing
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On Monday, May 24, 2010, TheProphetUntold
(160) wrote:
Awesome short piece, I think it may read better with out the 'so pure and true' line. Just a suggestion. Good write, either way. -He.
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On Monday, May 24, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
Thank you for your critique. I'm kind of attached to that line both rythmically as well as as a dichotomy. Dark Hailz! -Ray
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