An Oath To My Beloved

By HeadpatSlut

An Oath to My Beloved

To tell of my Beloved's face-
To give my lonely soul Her grace-
To be forgiven for my sin-
To feel Her love from within-
To speak of Her as a light in my spirit-
A vow I uptake and I wish Her to hear it-
And all while the Valkeries are singing above-
Inside of my heart it's her that I love-
So that with my passion and all of my heart-
For Her alone I be torn asunder, apart-
And if but for a glance for her I would die-
So that in peacful, quiet Death, in her lap I may lie-
The only one upon this earth-
With her alone, my life has worth-
As such, my time with Her is bliss-
She's my Eternal Happiness.

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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Thursday, May 20, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

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  • Star On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, Star (926)By person wrote:

    beautiful piece of work :)

  • A former member wrote: Absolutely Gorgeous! I Loved it! Write on please!

  • A former member wrote: a beautiful write my metal friend! \m/ \m/

  • A former member wrote: Awwww... I love your love poem! Fun change of pace for you. =)

  • A former member wrote: Empathy and envy rise in unison....dammit, wordsmith, I like it

  • Rowan On Sunday, June 6, 2010, Rowan (202)By person wrote:

    This was so beautiful and heartfelt, devil. Awww my heart just melted.

  • A former member wrote: This was so beautiful and sweet (not in a sugar-coated way), and so unexpected, having in mind your other works. When I read this I thought of your short story about the children of Bathory. It's incredible that one and the same person is the author of both. I suspect you will never cease to amaze me.

  • Shortnlethal On Sunday, May 23, 2010, Shortnlethal (65)By person wrote:

    lovely depictison ^^ thank you for sharing ^^

  • A former member wrote: Sweet and touching. =)

  • A former member wrote: that was so sweet it made me cry.... did you write that for me?

  • A former member wrote: This piece is beautiful. An expression of true love. The only emotion that can bring true happiness and also bring the deepest depression. It's much better to feel the lighter side of such a curious emotion. It's nice to see someone who feels this light. Great expression of your feelings. Thanks for sharing.

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, May 20, 2010, lupus tenebrae (870)By person wrote:

    It's nice that you have someone to bring that much joy, and such a beautiful tribute to her, the range of your works show incredible prowess, well done. Scholar

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