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An Oath To My Beloved
By HeadpatSlut
An Oath to My Beloved
To tell of my Beloved's
face-
To give my lonely soul Her grace-
To be forgiven for my
sin-
To feel Her love from within-
To speak of Her as a light
in my spirit-
A vow I uptake and I wish Her to hear it-
And
all while the Valkeries are singing above-
Inside of my heart it's
her that I love-
So that with my passion and all of my heart-
For Her alone I be torn asunder, apart-
And if but for a glance
for her I would die-
So that in peacful, quiet Death, in her lap
I may lie-
The only one upon this earth-
With her alone, my life
has worth-
As such, my time with Her is bliss-
She's my Eternal
Happiness.
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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Author's Note:
...........Comments on "An Oath To My Beloved"
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, Star
(919)
wrote:
beautiful piece of work :)
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely Gorgeous! I Loved it! Write on please!
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A former member wrote:
a beautiful write my metal friend! \m/ \m/
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A former member wrote:
Awwww... I love your love poem! Fun change of pace for you. =)
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A former member wrote:
Empathy and envy rise in unison....dammit, wordsmith, I like it
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On Sunday, June 6, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
This was so beautiful and heartfelt, devil. Awww my heart just melted.
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A former member wrote:
This was so beautiful and sweet (not in a sugar-coated way), and so unexpected, having in mind your other works. When I read this I thought of your short story about the children of Bathory. It's incredible that one and the same person is the author of both. I suspect you will never cease to amaze me.
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On Sunday, May 23, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
lovely depictison ^^ thank you for sharing ^^
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A former member wrote:
Sweet and touching. =)
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A former member wrote:
that was so sweet it made me cry.... did you write that for me?
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A former member wrote:
This piece is beautiful. An expression of true love. The only emotion that can bring true happiness and also bring the deepest depression. It's much better to feel the lighter side of such a curious emotion. It's nice to see someone who feels this light. Great expression of your feelings. Thanks for sharing.
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
It's nice that you have someone to bring that much joy, and such a beautiful tribute to her, the range of your works show incredible prowess, well done.
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