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99
By ColdScaredAlone
Stale air
Envelopes
Tastless words
That flow from a
Gaping mouth
I'd unhinge my jaw
To swallow it all
Breathe I can not
The air is dry
Sleep I can not
I lay upon a
Bed of stones
As the pains
Of the world
Hover above
My adolecent
Skull
I'd unhing my jaw
To swallow it all
If I could just
Swallow it all.
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Copyright 2003 ColdScaredAlone
Published on Monday, June 2, 2003.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
This is....captivating...I can't really think of something to say, just...wow, and that's just bad and generic, but wow. and I'm sorry...
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
truely a remarkable piece of work!
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"I'd unhinge my jaw To swallow it all Breathe I can not". . wow. . this was truly painful, a sense of coming to an end. . in misery . . but a truly wonderful work
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
just amazing, well chosen words, and it flows wonderfully. _Syn
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
speechless..... -Morb
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
We'll never be able to swallow all of society's shit.I suggest to spit it back in their faces.
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
awesome write, i believe that you are more than worthy to be dubbed a fav on my lists :) *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Monday, August 25, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
one word...awesome!!!!!
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
This is another good one! I love the ending.
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
this brings a sense of overwhelming pain. i could feel the stale air though your words. very well done. i loved it. -moon
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful poem and also a very creative title! great job!
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A former member wrote:
oh,......words cant say what i feel right now. I love it at the very least
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On Friday, June 6, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
i like the write....but what is the pic suposse to be?
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On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
ya, very kool. both the pic and this poem. bravo ~gothic~
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On Monday, June 2, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Wow. Me likes Sarah. Btw, I love that pic on the top, so cool. Me likes alot Sarah.
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On Monday, June 2, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
me like me like!
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