Imprint

By Narcissa

She moves the rain
The ritual
Of dancing under a storm collapsing…
She is a gallery of blue
Butterfly knots
Elements webbing her spirit ebbing…
Chanting, a sort of prayer, for guidance


Lavender charms in trees of ash
A snowing circle of burnt sage
Cleanses the lost and faithless
…And she is the incantation


Crawling like winter, or water
Tingling bones with cat-like whiskers
She imprints
The earth splits between her fingers
Delicately she dips
Nuzzling his wind till she is air itself
His weakened heart, a flint for passion
Like heat between two sticks and stirred dry leaves

.He believes.
They all believe
In her.

But
Wild is she. Like the rain
She is a hair in the mare’s thick mane
Knowing
Nothing is beneath her now
Frightened she flees
For her past has pressed her
Into a brittle reminder

…Even the chosen
Are blemished….

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Copyright 2010 Narcissa
Published on Sunday, January 17, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Inspired by Zoey
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    The imagery in this is spot-on, my dear.

  • A former member wrote: i think, maybe...maybe, through love's eyes, blemishes become smoothed away. its not that we don't recognize those faults and flaws, but that those are the little imperfections we cherish most. your words are soft and smoothing......

  • A former member wrote: this piece is trembling with life, this wilderness of your mind.. makes me think that beauty is too an exquisite blemish..

  • A former member wrote: i cannot even fathom where such things as this come fom. take me there one day please? so that I may know what real beauty is. because this, this is beautiful kelloggs *hugs*~moony

  • Dilated View On Sunday, January 17, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    I would be concerned if there were someone in which you found no blemishes. Because that's what makes us all authentic as we are all blemished in our own ways. I really liked the two opposing sides in this and the flow kept me interested throughout. Very interesting read.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Sunday, January 17, 2010, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    And blemished is the only way the rest of can believe we have a fighting chance against the heart collector, which evidently only comes out in the rain because he/she knows thats when we are our most vulnerable, when our thoughts melt by acid rain, and the ashes never seem to melt away, they stick to our skin to remind us of our past, of the mistakes, and the scent of lavender is not for today, but the aroma of a brighter tommorow, if only that tomorrow came, greta read my dear -symph-

  • A former member wrote: Very nice, very well done.

  • Scorn Me On Sunday, January 17, 2010, Scorn Me (4)By person wrote:

    thank u its great. it made me wanna dance in the rain. too bad its winter now T_T...

  • A former member wrote: I was able to picture every line and for that, I thank you; It was beautiful.


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