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Shun
By shadowsinthelight
Fusion,
Two becoming one
Rejection,
One staying one
Affection,
I am feeling for you
Connection,
Always missing me
Confession,
Revealing painfully
Intention,
Slowly leaving me
Derision,
From lips I have kissed
Confusion,
What have I missed
Illusion,
Part of reality
Revelation,
Rare moments of clarity
Solution,
Help me understand
Conclusion,
Take me by the hand
Fission,
One becoming two
Depression,
Me without you
©2002 by steve giacomini
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© 2008 shadowsinthelight
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Shun"
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A former member wrote:
i like this poem alot.theres alot of feeling in it.
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On Wednesday, August 12, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti
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wrote:
sweet piece...-l-
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A former member wrote:
awwwwww.....i don't know about every body else but....AWWWWWW this is sooooo sweet. The last line really nails it all together. I love this!
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On Thursday, January 22, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
very nice flow, indeed. i felt like a back and forth emotion of strength and weakness throughout the piece...-l-
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A former member wrote:
Incredibly fluent, Excellent.
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
slips easily down through thoughts and pulls at memories until the softly painful ending... well done
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Believer
(48) wrote:
indeed.
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