honey-bee
By Jonas
dreams are the disaster
that shake the ground and loose the rafters from their nails
the roof falls to the foundation
come now or come after
it's more than titillating pictures and whispers of transcendence
of the modular ramifications
the summary of hysterical laughter
in the stars
in the action
in the shape of the world taking on the reflection of the minds
inside
dreams are the disaster
so feel free
to turn your lips
from a watered down kiss
in the achievement of a true perfection
lost in the dizzying beauty
of incessant contradiction
loose
the grip
of the vice on the heart
down
dark hearted charity
curse to the veils
that shield your reaction from eyes that would otherwise see the
intersection
of your life and pure information
the tendency to shatter
the action that comes to dictate reality when serenity is spread and
tethered
when straws shatter camels
the summary of hysterical laughter
the known
combined reactions
are nothing in the face of the detection of something further than this
more than it seems
dreams are the disaster
Comments on "honey-bee"
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
i see your dreams are as scattered and random as mine are. 'dreams are the disaster' beautiful ending to an awesome poem. ~ta~
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On Wednesday, December 31, 2008, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i'm not sure 'scattered and random' is a compliment here, but i think it was intended as such, so, thank you.
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On Wednesday, January 7, 2009, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
you are right sir. 'scattered and random' is not the compliment, but 'beautiful ending to an awesome poem' is. i think i was just trying to say i relate to the dreams. it is a beautiful poem. ~ta~
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On Sunday, June 1, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
i'm not sure i really get this..but i like it anyway...
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On Sunday, June 1, 2008, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
.wide eyed and still dreaming.
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On Saturday, May 31, 2008, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
oooh very nice. :)