honey-bee

By Jonas

dreams are the disaster
that shake the ground and loose the rafters from their nails
the roof falls to the foundation

come now or come after
it's more than titillating pictures and whispers of transcendence
of the modular ramifications

the summary of hysterical laughter
in the stars
in the action
in the shape of the world taking on the reflection of the minds
inside
dreams are the disaster

so feel free
to turn your lips
from a watered down kiss
in the achievement of a true perfection
lost in the dizzying beauty
of incessant contradiction
loose
the grip
of the vice on the heart
down
dark hearted charity

curse to the veils
that shield your reaction from eyes that would otherwise see the
intersection
of your life and pure information

the tendency to shatter
the action that comes to dictate reality when serenity is spread and
tethered
when straws shatter camels

the summary of hysterical laughter
the known
combined reactions
are nothing in the face of the detection of something further than this
more than it seems
dreams are the disaster

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© 2008 Jonas
Published on Saturday, May 31, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • denver nitze On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    i see your dreams are as scattered and random as mine are. 'dreams are the disaster' beautiful ending to an awesome poem. ~ta~

  • Jonas On Wednesday, December 31, 2008, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i'm not sure 'scattered and random' is a compliment here, but i think it was intended as such, so, thank you.

  • denver nitze On Wednesday, January 7, 2009, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    you are right sir. 'scattered and random' is not the compliment, but 'beautiful ending to an awesome poem' is. i think i was just trying to say i relate to the dreams. it is a beautiful poem. ~ta~

  • The Lipstick Factor On Sunday, June 1, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    i'm not sure i really get this..but i like it anyway...

  • slow.burn.star On Sunday, June 1, 2008, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    .wide eyed and still dreaming.

  • Moonflower On Saturday, May 31, 2008, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    oooh very nice. :)

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